With a bit of editing and a grammar check, I think OnyxRider's posts are fine.
Unfortunately, whatever point he generally wants to convey gets lost in translation to English.
Seriously, I start to read his posts, but I get tired of trying to figure out what he's attempting to say and move on.
NYG, speaking of "legion of fans", you're quickly developing a "fan" base here on CC with your repetitive commentary and opinions.