Tweak whatever you want, the fact of the matter is there is absolutely no need to go any further than "Please help me, I'm getting screwed big time by this builder, does anyone have information on how to straighten out this load of crap I'm being fed from the builder?" and I never said I didn't feel sorry for the guys predicament pertaining to his car....sucks being jerked around like that. As far as listing people we know that have suddenly died, we've all known of people dying unexpectedly. That's the way most people die. Even terminally ill people die unexpectedly. You think we look at the time and say oh sh.. gotta go...see ya!